lundi 4 mai 2009

Witing final test ( Tryst )

Tryst should win the best play of the year award


Today, most of us like to hear stories which are related to real lives. Tryst is a story that happened in real life all the time. When I watched this play, I was thinking about the similar stories that I hear all the time from friends and family. Tryst should win the best play of the year award because it is a realistic story and because everything about this play was good.


This play was about a rich and middle age woman who has never been married in her life. All she wanted was to get married and have a romantic life. She was not a very good looking woman and she was working in a Hat Shop. Finally, one day she met a good looking man who liked her and he asked her to marry him. She fell in love with him and she got married without telling her family. After a while she found out that her husband wants to steal her money and walks away. She got mad at him and she asks him to stay with her. She tells her husband that they can open a Hat Shop together and become rich. She tells him that they can live happily ever after together. Her husband accepted but at the end of the play he killed her in the bath.
This story shows two different characters. The man was a good looking man who could not be faithful to women and he was always getting advantage of them by stealing their money. He always was choosing ordinary women who have never been married. These kind of women are always more sensitive and they fall in love faster and easier. This man could not change himself because that was his personality and his nature. These kind of men are everywhere in our real lives. There are many men who are always looking for easy women to get advantage of them. It’s not only about men and women but we also see these kinds of situations between two human beings. Many people are always looking for friendships that they can get advantage. This play should win the best play because it is very realistic.

What was also very good about this play is that the actor and the actress were perfect for this kind of play. The woman’s style and attitudes were showing her personality. The way she dressed and the way she was acting was very natural for her situation. The man character and his personality were perfect as well. They both spoke loud and very clear. The design of their room and the colors of lights were giving a sad and mysterious feeling to people. The way the woman was crying was very natural and sad.



Everything in this play was very good and it deserves to win the best play award. It is a very touching play. That is not only my opinion because I saw all the people in the play were very touched by it. It is good to show the reality in the plays or movies because it reminds us of our real lives.

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1 commentaire:

  1. Today, most of us like to hear stories which are related to real lives. (23) Tryst is a story that happened (10) in real life all the time. (23) When I watched this play, I was thinking (11) about the (17) similar stories that I hear (11) all the time (23) from friends and family. Tryst should win the best play of the year award because it is a realistic story and because everything about this play was good.

    This play was about a rich and (17) middle age (10) woman who has (11) never been married in her life. (17) All she wanted was to get married and have a romantic life. (23) She was not a very good looking woman and she was working (11) in a Hat Shop. (23) Finally, one day she met a good looking man who liked her and he asked her to marry him. She fell in love with him and she got married without telling her family. After a while she found out that her husband wants (10) to steal her money and walks (10) away. (23) She got mad at him and she (17) asks (10) him to stay with her. She tells (11) her husband that they can (11) open a Hat Shop together and become rich. She tells (11) him that they can (11) live happily ever after together. Her husband accepted but at the end of the play he killed her in the bath. (23)

    This story shows two different characters. (11, 23) The man was a (17) good looking man (18) who (17) could not be faithful to women and he was (17) always getting (18) advantage of them by stealing their money. He always was choosing (11) ordinary women who have (11) never been married. These kind of women are (11) always more sensitive and they fall (11) in love faster and easier. (23) This (15) man could not change himself because that was his personality and (17, 24) his nature. These kind of men are everywhere in our real lives. (23) There are many men who are always (17) looking (11) for easy women to get (18) advantage of them (17). It’s not only about men and women but we also see these kinds of situations between two human beings. (23) Many people are always looking for friendships that they can get advantage. (18, 23) This play should win the best play because it is very realistic.

    What was also very good about this play is (11) that the actor and the actress were perfect for this kind of play. (18, 23) The woman’s style and attitudes (14) were (17) showing (10) her personality. The way she dressed and the way she was acting (10) was very natural for her situation. (23) The man (21) character and his personality were perfect as well. They both spoke loud (16) and very clear. The design of their room (18) and the colors of lights were giving (18, 11) a sad and mysterious feeling to (15) people. The way the woman was crying (11) was very natural and sad (17) .

    Everything in this play was very good and it deserves to win the best play award. It is (11) a very touching play. That is not only my opinion because I saw all the people in the play were very touched by it. (18, 23) It is good to show the (17) reality (18) in the (17) plays or (18) movies because it reminds us of our real lives.

    530 words
    Grammar: 10/25
    Syntax: 12/25
    Content: 15/25
    Rhetoric: 15/25
    Total: 52/100

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